lol I cannot sleep with tons of thoughts inside so I decide to write an essay and then correct it right after a few hours.
Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It has been...
Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been a great concern for people to believe that what requires human to have personal achievements in life is completely luck. However, I completely disagree with this opinion.
To begin with, efforts and passions are the main factors in the process of building up a firm basement for people's success. Within such significant points, conquering life target is much easier. For instance, apart from having a good head for languages, language learners need to equip themselves with enthusiasm to go further and gain more knowledge. However, without making efforts to research, having a tendency to forget the proceed lessons is inevitable.
On the other hand, not every person who reaches their aim is completely lucky. Nick Vujicic, an Australian speaker, actor, and book author suffers from a physical disorder leading to the absence of limbs. Despite his situation, he always turns up towards the public with his motivational speeches and establishes his own work worldwide. Another example is, Thomas Edison, a prominent inventor of human's history, spent thousands of time manufacturing light-bulb with efforts and dedication.
To sum up, luck is merely a small factor for people to attain their life goals. Personally, I think that people should pay more time and efforts to achieve their targets, not just expecting a miracle from life.

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Phạm Hoàng Phúc
Look like an IELTS format :v But you did it great, I never though someone would pondering about it before sleep
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cashie130902
^^ thanks for your nice comment! Yes, it was Ielts. Just picking up one of the topics to write at random for taking out my negative thoughts 'bout my life immediately.
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Sounds like what self-help books would write. But I think luck plays an important role, as much as your own effort. The thing is that, luck isn't merely just a miracle, it's a probability of opportunity when you're prepared to take it. The better you're prepared, the more likely you will achieve or succeed. My encounter with spiderum may be luck, but it's mostly because I actively look for knowledge, debate and discussion. That's to say, even in the most extreme cases like accidents, what separates life and death may actually be what you've accumulated in your life so far.
It may be better if you treat luck as a numeric parameter in life so that you can gauge it according to your own ability and experience, and then present yourself in the most convenient position.
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cashie130902
many thanks for your enthusiastic response to my post! About my post, it's not totally a social argument and actually, I'm currently in the process of practicing for the IELTS task 2 essay and this can be called one of my practice one, lol. Personally, I think that your thesis statement is supported significantly well but still, I have some contrasting ideas for this argument - as you'd like to mention. The probability of achieving luck can be raised up according to the efforts we make, but not for most of the cases. That successful work does include luck, but people don't choose the way of being depending on luck. For one reason, that is, as you said, the probability of getting an opportunity to gain luck is still there, but not everyone dares to have a gambling deal all the time with everything they've got since it's just a probability.
I'd like to treat luck as a gambling deal lol, but still, do need it for indeed.
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